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Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Fix typos found by codespell
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Eric Blake |
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Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Fix typos found by codespell |
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Wed, 2 Nov 2016 08:29:26 -0500 |
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On 11/01/2016 08:32 PM, Zhang Chen wrote:
>>> I still don't understand the comment in docs/colo-proxy.txt.
>> Me neither.
>>
>>
>
> Which part of the docs/colo-proxy.txt?
The one quoted below.
> Perhaps I can explain it more clearly and make the doc better.
>
>>> +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
>>> @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ secondary.
>>> == Usage ==
>>> -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
>>> +Here, we use demo ip and port describe more clearly.
>>> Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
>>> -netdev
>>> tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown
>>> -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66
>> Maybe:
>>
>> Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
>> clearly describe the usage.
>>
>> The remaining hunks are clear improvements, so:
>> Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <address@hidden>
>
> It's easier to understand.
Okay, so you like my proposal for a potential reword. Now, who should
submit it as a patch? Stefan (since he found the confusing sentence in
the first place), you (since you wrote most of the document to begin
with), or me (since I proposed wording that you like)?
--
Eric Blake eblake redhat com +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org
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