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Re: [Qemu-devel] [virtio-dev] [PATCH v16 1/2] virtio-crypto: Add virtio


From: Gonglei (Arei)
Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [virtio-dev] [PATCH v16 1/2] virtio-crypto: Add virtio crypto device specification
Date: Wed, 8 Feb 2017 06:24:26 +0000

Hi Halil,

Thanks for your comments firstly.

> 
> On 01/18/2017 09:22 AM, Gonglei wrote:
> > The virtio crypto device is a virtual crypto device (ie. hardware
> > crypto accelerator card). Currently, the virtio crypto device provides
> > the following crypto services: CIPHER, MAC, HASH, and AEAD.
> >
> > In this patch, CIPHER, MAC, HASH, AEAD services are introduced.
> >
> > VIRTIO-153
> >
> > Signed-off-by: Gonglei <address@hidden>
> > CC: Michael S. Tsirkin <address@hidden>
> > CC: Cornelia Huck <address@hidden>
> > CC: Stefan Hajnoczi <address@hidden>
> > CC: Lingli Deng <address@hidden>
> > CC: Jani Kokkonen <address@hidden>
> > CC: Ola Liljedahl <address@hidden>
> > CC: Varun Sethi <address@hidden>
> > CC: Zeng Xin <address@hidden>
> > CC: Keating Brian <address@hidden>
> > CC: Ma Liang J <address@hidden>
> > CC: Griffin John <address@hidden>
> > CC: Mihai Claudiu Caraman <address@hidden>
> > ---
> >  content.tex       |    2 +
> >  virtio-crypto.tex | 1245
> +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> >  2 files changed, 1247 insertions(+)
> >  create mode 100644 virtio-crypto.tex
> >
> > diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex
> > index 4b45678..ab75f78 100644
> > --- a/content.tex
> > +++ b/content.tex
> > @@ -5750,6 +5750,8 @@ descriptor for the \field{sense_len},
> \field{residual},
> >  \field{status_qualifier}, \field{status}, \field{response} and
> >  \field{sense} fields.
> >
> > +\input{virtio-crypto.tex}
> > +
> >  \chapter{Reserved Feature Bits}\label{sec:Reserved Feature Bits}
> >
> >  Currently there are three device-independent feature bits defined:
> > diff --git a/virtio-crypto.tex b/virtio-crypto.tex
> > new file mode 100644
> > index 0000000..732cd30
> > --- /dev/null
> > +++ b/virtio-crypto.tex
> > @@ -0,0 +1,1245 @@
> > +\section{Crypto Device}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device}
> > +
> > +The virtio crypto device is a virtual cryptography device as well as a 
> > kind of
> > +virtual hardware accelerator for virtual machines. The encryption and
> > +decryption requests are placed in any of the data active queues and are
> ultimately handled by the
> 
> Am I the only one having a problem with 'data active queues'?

Maybe 'data queues' here is enough?

> I have objected on this before.
> 
> > +backend crypto accelerators. The second kind of queue is the control queue
> used to create
> > +or destroy sessions for symmetric algorithms and will control some
> advanced
> > +features in the future. The virtio crypto device provides the following 
> > crypto
> > +services: CIPHER, MAC, HASH, and AEAD.
> > +
> > +
> > +\subsection{Device ID}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device / Device ID}
> > +
> > +20
> > +
> > +\subsection{Virtqueues}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device /
> Virtqueues}
> > +
> > +\begin{description}
> > +\item[0] dataq1
> > +\item[\ldots]
> > +\item[N-1] dataqN
> > +\item[N] controlq
> > +\end{description}
> > +
> > +N is set by \field{max_dataqueues}.
> > +
> > +\subsection{Feature bits}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device / Feature
> bits}
> > +
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_NON_SESSION_MODE (0) non-session mode is available.
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_CIPHER_NON_SESSION_MODE (1) non-session mode is
> available for CIPHER service.
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_HASH_NON_SESSION_MODE (2) non-session mode is
> available for HASH service.
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_MAC_NON_SESSION_MODE (3) non-session mode is
> available for MAC service.
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_AEAD_NON_SESSION_MODE (4) non-session mode is
> available for AEAD service.
> > +
> 
> I'm not sure that "non-session" entirely correct grammatically. I would
> prefer sessionless as alternatively proposed by Stefan, or even stateless.
> I think stateless is the phrase most frequently used to describe what
> we want to introduce -- that is basically response = f(request) and
> not response = f(request, server_state) where the server_state is
> a is determined by a series of previous interactions between the server
> and the client).
> 
Makes sense. I discussed with Xin about this on call meeting two weeks ago.
I decide to use stateless mode instead of non-session mode here.

> > +\subsubsection{Feature bit requirements}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto
> Device / Feature bits}
> > +
> > +Some crypto feature bits require other crypto feature bits
> > +(see \ref{drivernormative:Basic Facilities of a Virtio Device / Feature 
> > Bits}):
> > +
> > +\begin{description}
> > +\item[VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_CIPHER_NON_SESSION_MODE] Requires
> VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_NON_SESSION_MODE.
> > +\item[VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_HASH_NON_SESSION_MODE] Requires
> VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_NON_SESSION_MODE.
> > +\item[VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_MAC_NON_SESSION_MODE] Requires
> VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_NON_SESSION_MODE.
> > +\item[VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_AEAD_NON_SESSION_MODE] Requires
> VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_NON_SESSION_MODE.
> > +\end{description}
> > +
> > +\subsection{Device configuration layout}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto
> Device / Device configuration layout}
> > +
> > +The following driver-read-only configuration fields are defined:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +struct virtio_crypto_config {
> > +    le32 status;
> > +    le32 max_dataqueues;
> > +    le32 crypto_services;
> > +    /* Detailed algorithms mask */
> > +    le32 cipher_algo_l;
> > +    le32 cipher_algo_h;
> > +    le32 hash_algo;
> > +    le32 mac_algo_l;
> > +    le32 mac_algo_h;
> > +    le32 aead_algo;
> > +    /* Maximum length of cipher key */
> > +    le32 max_cipher_key_len;
> > +    /* Maximum length of authenticated key */
> > +    le32 max_auth_key_len;
> > +    le32 reserved;
> > +    /* Maximum size of each crypto request's content */
> > +    le64 max_size;
> > +};
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The value of the \field{status} field is VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY or
> ~VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY.
> 
> Not entirely happy with this. What you want to say is reserved
> for future use, or? Would it make sense to have a general note
> -- in a similar fashion like for 'sizes are in bytes' -- for
> reserved for future use?
> 
> One possible formulation would be:
> 
> "In this specification, unless explicitly stated otherwise,
> fields and bits reserved for future use shall be zeroed out.
> Both the a device or a driver device and the driver should
> detect violations of this rule, and deny the requested
> operation in an appropriate way if possible."
> 
> 
Cornelia also provided a good suggestion about this. :)

> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY  (1 << 0)
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY flag is used to show whether the
> hardware is ready to work or not.
> 
> I do not like hardware here.
> 
Sorry about that, but it has existed in both Qemu and Linux driver. :(

> > +
> > +The following driver-read-only fields include \field{max_dataqueues}, which
> specifies the
> 
> Why following?
> 
Er, I used 'following' at here and there... It's just an auxiliary word.

> > +maximum number of data virtqueues (dataq1\ldots dataqN), and
> \field{crypto_services},
> > +which indicates the crypto services the virtio crypto supports.
> > +
> > +The following services are defined:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +/* CIPHER service */
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_CIPHER 0
> > +/* HASH service */
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_HASH   1
> > +/* MAC (Message Authentication Codes) service */
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_MAC    2
> > +/* AEAD (Authenticated Encryption with Associated Data) service */
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_AEAD   3
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The last driver-read-only fields specify detailed algorithms masks
> > +the device offers for corresponding services. The following CIPHER
> algorithms
> > +are defined:
> 
> You do not establish an explicit relationship between the fields and the
> macros for the flags. These are flags or? It seems quite common in the
> spec to use _F_ in flag names. Would it be appropriate here?
> 
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_NO_CIPHER                 0
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_ARC4               1
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_AES_ECB            2
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_AES_CBC            3
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_AES_CTR            4
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_DES_ECB            5
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_DES_CBC            6
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_3DES_ECB           7
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_3DES_CBC           8
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_3DES_CTR           9
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_KASUMI_F8          10
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_SNOW3G_UEA2        11
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_AES_F8             12
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_AES_XTS            13
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_ZUC_EEA3           14
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The following HASH algorithms are defined:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_NO_HASH            0
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_MD5           1
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA1          2
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA_224       3
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA_256       4
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA_384       5
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA_512       6
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA3_224      7
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA3_256      8
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA3_384      9
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA3_512      10
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA3_SHAKE128      11
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_SHA3_SHAKE256      12
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The following MAC algorithms are defined:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_NO_MAC                       0
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_HMAC_MD5                 1
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_HMAC_SHA1                2
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_HMAC_SHA_224             3
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_HMAC_SHA_256             4
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_HMAC_SHA_384             5
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_HMAC_SHA_512             6
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_CMAC_3DES                25
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_CMAC_AES                 26
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_KASUMI_F9                27
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_SNOW3G_UIA2              28
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_GMAC_AES                 41
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_GMAC_TWOFISH             42
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_CBCMAC_AES               49
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_CBCMAC_KASUMI_F9         50
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_XCBC_AES                 53
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_ZUC_EIA3                 54
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The following AEAD algorithms are defined:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_NO_AEAD     0
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_GCM    1
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_CCM    2
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_CHACHA20_POLY1305  3
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> 
> Would it make sense to interleave the flag definition
> with the struct virtio_crypto_config?
> 
> > +\begin{note}
> > +Any other values are reserved for future use.
> 
> Are these flags or values? I do not think values is appropriate here.
> 
Please refer to my reply in another thread.

> > +\end{note}
> > +
> 
> Some fields are missing here. This is inconsistent. Either
> you should describe all or none (here).
> 
Ok, will add other fields.

> > +\devicenormative{\subsubsection}{Device configuration layout}{Device Types
> / Crypto Device / Device configuration layout}
> > +
> > +\begin{itemize*}
> > +\item The device MUST set \field{max_dataqueues} to between 1 and 65535
> inclusive.
> > +\item The device MUST set \field{status} based on the status of the
> hardware-backed implementation.
> 
> What is a hardware-backend?
> 
I meant the cryptodev backend, cryptodev-builtin, cryptodev-vhost-user for 
example.

> > +\item The device MUST accept and handle requests after \field{status} is 
> > set
> to VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY.
> 
> Shouldn't this be the other way around (if VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY
> then reject). Is a not well formed request or a backend failure considered?
> What does handle mean? What should happen if requests are submitted
> before VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY is set?
> 
The requests MUST not be transmitted before VIRTIO_CRYPTO_S_HW_READY is set.
Which is stated by the driver requirements. Otherwise the requests will be 
dropped.

The handle means execute crypto operations.

> > +\item The device MUST set \field{crypto_services} based on the crypto
> services the device offers.
> > +\item The device MUST set detailed algorithms masks based on the
> \field{crypto_services} field.
> > +\item The device MUST set \field{max_size} to show the maximum size of
> crypto request the device supports.
> > +\item The device MUST set \field{max_cipher_key_len} to show the
> maximum length of cipher key if the device supports CIPHER service.
> > +\item The device MUST set \field{max_auth_key_len} to show the maximum
> length of authenticated key if the device supports MAC service.
> > +\end{itemize*}
> > +
> > +\drivernormative{\subsubsection}{Device configuration layout}{Device Types
> / Crypto Device / Device configuration layout}
> > +
> > +\begin{itemize*}
> > +\item The driver MUST read the ready \field{status} from the bottom bit of
> status to check whether the hardware-backed
> > +      implementation is ready or not, and the driver MUST reread it after
> the device reset.
> > +\item The driver MUST NOT transmit any packets to the device if the ready
> \field{status} is not set.
> > +\item The driver MUST read \field{max_dataqueues} field to discover the
> number of data queues the device supports.
> > +\item The driver MUST read \field{crypto_services} field to discover which
> services the device is able to offer.
> > +\item The driver MUST read the detailed algorithms fields based on
> \field{crypto_services} field.
> > +\item The driver SHOULD read \field{max_size} to discover the maximum
> size of crypto request the device supports.
> > +\item The driver SHOULD read \field{max_cipher_key_len} to discover the
> maximum length of cipher key the device supports.
> > +\item The driver SHOULD read \field{max_auth_key_len} to discover the
> maximum length of authenticated key the device supports.
> > +\end{itemize*}
> > +
> > +\subsection{Device Initialization}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device /
> Device Initialization}
> > +
> > +\drivernormative{\subsubsection}{Device Initialization}{Device Types /
> Crypto Device / Device Initialization}
> > +
> > +\begin{itemize*}
> > +\item The driver MUST identify and initialize the control virtqueue.
> 
> But does not have to identify and initialize any data virtqueues?
> 
Good catch. Both controlq and dataq.

> > +\item The driver MUST read the supported crypto services from bits of
> \field{crypto_services}.
> > +\item The driver MUST read the supported algorithms based on
> \field{crypto_services} field.
> > +\end{itemize*}
> > +
> > +\devicenormative{\subsubsection}{Device Initialization}{Device Types /
> Crypto Device / Device Initialization}
> > +
> > +\begin{itemize*}
> > +\item The device MUST be configured with at least one accelerator which
> executes backend crypto operations.
> 
> What does configured mean here? Is this initialization requirement.
> 
It means the virtio crypto device MUST attach cryptodev backend. 
Yes, it's a requirement.

> > +\item The device MUST write the \field{crypto_services} field based on the
> capacities of the backend accelerator.
> > +\end{itemize*}
> > +
> 
> How do 'Initialization' and 'Configuration Layout' requirements relate to
> each-other.
> 
Basically they do the same things. But 'configuration layout' can't state the
specific time.
 
> > +\subsection{Device Operation}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device /
> Device Operation}
> > +
> > +Packets can be transmitted by placing them in both the controlq and dataq.
> > +Packets consist of a general header and a service-specific request.
> 
> Are packets and requests synonyms?
> 
Yes, they are in virtio crypto spec.

> > +Where 'general header' is for all crypto requests, and 'service specific
> requests'
> 
> From below it seems you have two types of 'general header', but up until this
> point it seems there is a single definition. Of course, this does not
> really matter.
> 
I distinguish it based on controlq and dataq in following statement.

> > +are composed of operation parameter + output data + input data in general.
> > +Operation parameters are algorithm-specific parameters, output data is the
> > +data that should be utilized in operations, and input data is equal to
> > +"operation result + result data".
> > +
> > +The device can support both session mode (See \ref{sec:Device Types /
> Crypto Device / Device Operation / Control Virtqueue / Session operation}) and
> non-session mode, for example,
> > +As VIRTIO_CRYPTO_F_CIPHER_NON_SESSION_MODE feature bit is
> negotiated, the driver can use non-session mode for CIPHER service, otherwise
> it can only use session mode.
> 
> Grammar: Does not seem right to me. 'As' seems off and this could be two
> sentences.
> 
OK. Let me s/As/If the/ here.

> 
> > +
> > +\begin{note}
> > +The basic unit of all data length the byte.
> > +\end{note}
> > +
> > +The general header for controlq is as follows:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(service, op)   (((service) << 8) | (op))
> > +
> > +struct virtio_crypto_ctrl_header {
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_CREATE_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_CIPHER,
> 0x02)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_DESTROY_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_CIPHER,
> 0x03)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_CREATE_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_HASH, 0x02)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH_DESTROY_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_HASH, 0x03)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_CREATE_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_MAC, 0x02)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC_DESTROY_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_MAC, 0x03)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_CREATE_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_AEAD, 0x02)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_DESTROY_SESSION \
> > +       VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_AEAD, 0x03)
> > +    le32 opcode;
> > +    le32 algo;
> > +    le32 flag;
> > +    /* data virtqueue id */
> > +    le32 queue_id;
> > +};
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The general header of dataq:
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +struct virtio_crypto_op_header {
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_ENCRYPT \
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_CIPHER, 0x00)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_CIPHER_DECRYPT \
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_CIPHER, 0x01)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_HASH \
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_HASH, 0x00)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAC \
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_MAC, 0x00)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_ENCRYPT \
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_AEAD, 0x00)
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_AEAD_DECRYPT \
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OPCODE(VIRTIO_CRYPTO_SERVICE_AEAD, 0x01)
> > +    le32 opcode;
> > +    /* algo should be service-specific algorithms */
> > +    le32 algo;
> > +    /* session_id should be service-specific algorithms */
> > +    le64 session_id;
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_FLAG_SESSION_MODE 1
> > +#define VIRTIO_CRYPTO_FLAG_NON_SESSION_MODE 2
> 
> Use _F_ istead of _FLAG_?
> 
I'm afraid they are confused with the feature bits.

> > +    /* control flag to control the request */
> > +    le32 flag;
> > +    le32 padding;
> > +};
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +The device can set the operation status as follows: VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OK:
> success;
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_ERR: failure or device error; VIRTIO_CRYPTO_NOTSUPP:
> not supported;
> > +VIRTIO_CRYPTO_INVSESS: invalid session ID when executing crypto
> operations.
> > +
> > +\begin{lstlisting}
> > +enum VIRITO_CRYPTO_STATUS {
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_OK = 0,
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_ERR = 1,
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_BADMSG = 2,
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_NOTSUPP = 3,
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_INVSESS = 4,
> > +    VIRTIO_CRYPTO_MAX
> > +};
> > +\end{lstlisting}
> > +
> > +\subsubsection{Control Virtqueue}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device /
> Device Operation / Control Virtqueue}
> > +
> > +The driver uses the control virtqueue to send control commands to the
> > +device which handles the non-data plane operations, such as session
> 
> What is a 'non-data plane'?
> 
I named controlling plane as the non-data plane. Maybe it's superfluous.

> > +operations (See \ref{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device / Device Operation /
> Control Virtqueue / Session operation}).
> 
> Reviewed up until here. Depending on how things evolve will try to
> review the rest too in the following days.
> 
I knew it's a hard and time-consuming work to review such long spec.

Great thanks for your reviewing. :)

> A question and a remark as a closing word:
> * Are there already some kernel and qemu patches for this 'non-session' stuff?

THB currently I have a patch for virtio_crypto.h. 

Attaching it for better review.

> * I think some proofreading (and eventually also touch-up) by a native speaker
> would really benefit us. Sadly my grammar skills are very questionable, so
> I can't help much. Nevertheless since it is a spec, I think we sould strive
> for high standards in language usage too.
> 
I agree and I actually asked a native speaker in my company to review it 
several months ago. When all comments are handled, I'll do it again.

Thanks,
-Gonglei

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