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Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Grammar and spelling fixes
From: |
Ville Skyttä |
Subject: |
Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Grammar and spelling fixes |
Date: |
Tue, 12 Jun 2018 09:51:35 +0300 |
On Tue, Jun 12, 2018 at 1:00 AM, Eric Blake <address@hidden> wrote:
> On 06/11/2018 03:25 PM, Ville Skyttä wrote:
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Ville Skyttä <address@hidden>
>> ---
>
[...]
>
>> +++ b/docs/interop/qcow2.txt
>> @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ in the image file.
>> It contains pointers to the second level structures which are called
>> refcount
>> blocks and are exactly one cluster in size.
>> -Given a offset into the image file, the refcount of its cluster can be
>> obtained
>> +Given an offset into the image file, the refcount of its cluster can be
>> obtained
>> as follows:
>
>
> This line is now long; it might be better if you reflow 'obtained', more
> like...
>
>> refcount_block_entries = (cluster_size * 8 / refcount_bits)
>> @@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ The L1 table has a variable size (stored in the
>> header) and may use multiple
>> clusters, however it must be contiguous in the image file. L2 tables are
>> exactly one cluster in size.
>> -Given a offset into the virtual disk, the offset into the image file
>> can be
>> +Given an offset into the virtual disk, the offset into the image file can
>> be
>> obtained as follows:
>
>
> ...this line.
>
> With or without the reflow,
> Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <address@hidden>
Reflowing, new patch follows in a separate mail.