master ddd3752b944: ; * doc/emacs/dired.texi (Misc Dired Features): Fix wording.

[Eli Zaretskii]

branch: master
commit ddd3752b9442ba0528403822a5bb1b2e5e0ae985
Author: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Commit: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>

    ; * doc/emacs/dired.texi (Misc Dired Features): Fix wording.
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 doc/emacs/dired.texi | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/emacs/dired.texi b/doc/emacs/dired.texi
index 246d3e1a4bc..6c87db27ac1 100644
--- a/doc/emacs/dired.texi
+++ b/doc/emacs/dired.texi
@@ -1820,11 +1820,12 @@ information will not be displayed at all.
 @vindex dired-check-symlinks
   Dired fontifies the items in the Dired buffer.  If the
 @code{default-directory} of that buffer is remote, this might be
-extensive for symbolic links, because their @code{file-truename} is
-evaluated.  Set user option @code{dired-check-symlinks} to @code{nil}
-for remote directories, which suffer from a slow connection.  It can be
-declared as connection-local variable to match how a remote system is
-connectable (@pxref{Connection Variables}).
+expensive for symbolic links, because their @code{file-truename} needs
+to be accessed.  To avoid slowdown in Dired due to this, set user option
+@code{dired-check-symlinks} to @code{nil} for remote directories which
+suffer from a slow connection.  It can be declared as connection-local
+variable to match how a remote system is connectable (@pxref{Connection
+Variables}).
 
 @kindex + @r{(Dired)}
 @findex dired-create-directory