Re: draft release announcement

[Juergen Reuter]

"elegant input format" and "hard for other programs to parse" sounds 
somewhat like a contradiction.  Maybe "sophisticated" instead of 
"elegant" would be more appropriate?

I am not sure about capitalization in English language, but shouldn't

* all words in the headline except "than" start with a capital letter and

* the itemized texts start with small letters (except "DocBook"), since
  they continue an incomplete sentence?

Shouldn't there be a full-stop dot after the last item?

Greetings,
Juergen