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Re: draft release announcement
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Han-Wen Nienhuys |
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Re: draft release announcement |
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Wed, 01 Nov 2006 20:44:13 +0100 |
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Cameron Horsburgh escreveu:
Hmm, I'm still not happy with the first sentence! How about:
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The initial inspiration for LilyPond came ten years ago when two
musician friends grew disappointed with the bland and boring look of
computer generated scores.
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I used formatted iso. generated. GEnerated sounds a bit nerdy.
Also, the comma after 'improvements' should be replaced by a semi-colon.
rather a colon ?
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Han-Wen Nienhuys - address@hidden - http://www.xs4all.nl/~hanwen
LilyPond Software Design
-- Code for Music Notation
http://www.lilypond-design.com