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Re: Improve wording for an NR paragraph (issue 259710043 by address@hidd
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nine . fierce . ballads |
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Re: Improve wording for an NR paragraph (issue 259710043 by address@hidden) |
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Thu, 03 Sep 2015 01:28:05 +0000 |
https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely
File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode3489
Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:3489: will take up more space than
if they are on the same system.
"If these endings are spread over two systems, they take up more space
than if they were on the same system."
https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode3490
Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:3490: Or dynamics that @q{stick
out} of a system can be moved closer to the staff:
Starting a sentence with "or" seems too informal. How about, "Another
example is..."? Perhaps we could keep just one good example and throw
away the other one; or if they are both equally important, maybe they
deserve to be separate items.
https://codereview.appspot.com/259710043/