[Savannah-cvs] administration/content/gnu-content/faq Savannah...

[Michael J . Flickinger]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/administration
Module name:    administration
Branch:         
Changes by:     Michael J. Flickinger <address@hidden>  05/11/01 16:16:09

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content/faq: Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt 

Log message:
        grammatical fixes

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/faq/Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt.diff?tr1=1.1&tr2=1.2&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: 
administration/content/gnu-content/faq/Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt
diff -u 
administration/content/gnu-content/faq/Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt:1.1 
administration/content/gnu-content/faq/Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt:1.2
--- 
administration/content/gnu-content/faq/Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt:1.1  
    Fri Apr 15 18:22:01 2005
+++ administration/content/gnu-content/faq/Savannah_-_Why_chosing_Savannah.txt  
Tue Nov  1 16:16:09 2005
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<p>Well, Savannah has high proval approval requirements and thus
+<p>Well, Savannah has high project approval requirements and thus
 visitors can expect freedom-related qualities from projects hosted
-here (such as no proprietary dependencies). Moreover there is no ads,
+here (such as no proprietary dependencies). Moreover, there are no ads,
 thus you do not take the risk to get an ad for a proprietary
 competitor in your project page...</p>
 
@@ -10,4 +10,4 @@
 software, we also provide a bug tracking system that we consider
 better.</p>
 
-<p style="font-size: smaller">Updated $Date: 2005/04/15 18:22:01 $</p>
+<p style="font-size: smaller">Updated $Date: 2005/11/01 16:16:09 $</p>