[Savannah-cvs] administration/content/gnu-content/svn index.txt

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       11/09/12 00:10:59

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content/svn: index.txt 

Log message:
        try including real project name in cmd examples instead of placeholder

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/svn/index.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.5&r2=1.6

Patches:
Index: index.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/svn/index.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -b -r1.5 -r1.6
--- index.txt   15 Oct 2009 18:38:00 -0000      1.5
+++ index.txt   12 Sep 2011 00:10:59 -0000      1.6
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
-                <h3>Anonymous / read-only Subversion access</h3>
-<p>
-This project's Subversion repository can be checked out through anonymous
-Subversion with the following instruction set. The module you wish
-to check out must be specified as the <I>modulename</I>.
-</p>
+<h3>Anonymous / read-only Subversion access</h3>
+
+<p>This project's Subversion repository can be checked out anonymously
+as follows.  The module you wish to check out must be specified as the
+<I>modulename</I>.</p>
  
 
 <?php
@@ -12,22 +11,31 @@
 
 //        if ($project->CanUse("svn")) {
                 print '<h4>Access using the SVN protocol:</h4>';
-               print '<tt>svn co 
svn://svn.'.$project->getTypeBaseHost()."/<em>project</em>/<em>modulename</em></tt><br
 />";
+                print '<tt>svn co svn://svn.'
+                        . $project->getTypeBaseHost()
+                        . "/"
+                        . $project->getUnixName()
+                        . "/<em>modulename</em></tt><br />";
                 print '<h4>Access using HTTP (slower):</h4>';
-               print '<tt>svn co 
http://svn.'.$project->getTypeBaseHost()."/svn/<em>project</em>/<em>modulename</em></tt>";
+                print '<tt>svn co http://svn.'
+                        . $project->getTypeBaseHost()
+                        . "/svn/"
+                        . $project->getUnixName()                      
+                        . "/<em>modulename</em></tt>";
 //        }
 ?>
 
-<p>In most cases, you'll want to use the <tt>trunk</tt>
-module. Refer to a projects specific Subversion instructions if you're
-unsure, or browse the repository with ViewVC.</p>
+<p>Typically, you'll want to use <tt>trunk</tt> for
+<em>modulename</em>. Refer to a project's specific instructions if
+you're unsure, or browse the repository with ViewVC.</p>
+
 
-<h3>Project Member Subversion Access via SSH </h3>
+<h3>Project member Subversion access via SSH</h3>
 
 <p>Member access is performed using the Subversion over SSH method.</p>
 
 <p>
-The SSHv2 public key fingerprints for the machine hosting the cvs
+The SSHv2 public key fingerprints for the machine hosting the source
 trees are:
   
 <pre>
@@ -48,31 +56,33 @@
        
 //if ($project->CanUse("svn")) {
         print '<h4>Software repository (over SSH) :</h4>';
-       print '<tt>svn co 
svn+ssh://'.$username.'@svn.'.$project->getTypeBaseHost().
-       "/<em>project</em>/<em>modulename</em></tt>";
+        print '<tt>svn co svn+ssh://'
+              . $username
+              . '@svn.'
+              . $project->getTypeBaseHost()
+              . "/"
+              . $project->getUnixName()
+              . "/<em>modulename</em></tt>";
 //}
 
 ?>
 
-<h3>Import your Subversion tree</h3>
 
-<p>If your project already has an existing CVS repository that you
+<h3>Importing into Subversion on Savannah</h3>
+
+<p>If your project already has an existing source repository that you
 want to move to Savannah, check the <a
 href="http://savannah.gnu.org/maintenance/CvSToSvN";>conversion
-documentation</a> and then make an appointment with us for the
-migration on the <a
+documentation</a> and then submit a request for the
+migration in the <a
 href=http://savannah.gnu.org/projects/administration>Savannah
 Administration</a> project.</p>
 
 
-<h3>Export your Subversion tree</h3>
-
-You can access you subversion raw repository using the rsync read-only access:
-<pre>
-rsync rsync://svn.<?php echo $project->getTypeBaseHost(); ?>/svn/<?php echo 
$project->getUnixName(); ?>/
-</pre>
+<h3>Exporting Subversion tree from Savannah</h3>
 
-Then you can use that copy as a local svn repository:
+You can access your subversion raw repository using read-only access via
+rsync, and then use that copy as a local svn repository:
 <pre>
 rsync -avHS rsync://svn.<?php echo $project->getTypeBaseHost(); ?>/svn/<?php 
echo $project->getUnixName(); ?>/ /tmp/<?php echo $project->getUnixName(); 
?>.repo/
 svn co file:///tmp/<?php echo $project->getUnixName(); ?>.repo/ trunk