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From: ineiev
Subject: [Savannah-cvs] [803] proofread
Date: Fri, 27 Sep 2024 11:35:02 -0400 (EDT)

Revision: 803
          
http://svn.savannah.gnu.org/viewvc/?view=rev&root=administration&revision=803
Author:   ineiev
Date:     2024-09-27 11:35:00 -0400 (Fri, 27 Sep 2024)
Log Message:
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proofread

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/sviki/ValidNotices.mdwn

Modified: trunk/sviki/ValidNotices.mdwn
===================================================================
--- trunk/sviki/ValidNotices.mdwn       2024-09-12 16:24:19 UTC (rev 802)
+++ trunk/sviki/ValidNotices.mdwn       2024-09-27 15:35:00 UTC (rev 803)
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 <http://www.gnu.org/prep/maintain/html_node/Copyright-Notices.html>
 for further information.
 
-## Copyright notices
+## Legal notices
 
 Free software licenses rely on copyright law. The pro is that they are
 enforceable. The con is that you get the administrative burden.
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
 
 About the _copyright-holder_: the FSF recommends listing individual
 (real-world) names, or other entities with legal status, but it is
-acceptable to use ersatz identifiers like "Project Foo
-contributors" even when Project Foo has no legal existence. Using such
+acceptable to use identifiers like "Project Foo contributors" even when
+Project Foo has no legal existence. Using such
 fake identifiers makes the copyright less defendable in court.
 (Reference:
 
https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/savannah-hackers-public/2010-04/msg00005.html
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 and related messages.)
 
 Richard Stallman's _Legal Matters_ section in the GNU maintainers guide
-is worth reading (although some parts are specific to GNU projects):
+is worth reading (although some parts are specific to GNU packages):
 <http://www.gnu.org/prep/maintain/html_node/Legal-Matters.html>
 
 ## GNU GPL
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
 into a file named "COPYING".
 
 For more information, see
-<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/lgpl.html#SEC4>.
+<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/lgpl.html>.
 
 ## GFDL
 
@@ -80,13 +80,9 @@
 after the title page of each work.
 
 In addition, if you haven't already, please add a copy of the FDL
-(available from
-<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl.html>
+(available from <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl.html>
 in various formats) as a section of your works.
 
-For more information, see
-<http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl.html#SEC4>
-
 <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl-howto.html>
 also covers additional points, including a smaller notice that you can
 use in auxiliary files.




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