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Re: [PATCH]: Doc: NR @knownissue for partCombine + spanners (issue462907


From: tdanielsmusic
Subject: Re: [PATCH]: Doc: NR @knownissue for partCombine + spanners (issue4629073)
Date: Sun, 26 Jun 2011 08:58:43 +0000

LGTM apart from some editorial nitpicks noted.

Trevor


http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely
File Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely (right):

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode775
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:775: @code{Voice} is printed.
Stem directions set up & down accordingly while
Stem directions are set automatically while Solo and @notation{a due}
parts are identified and marked accordingly.

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode814
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:814: Even though both parts
have identical notes in the third measure, only
Both parts have identical notes in the third measure, so only one ...

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode816
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:816: are set automatically,
depending whether there is a solo or unison.
depending on whether the parts are playing solo or in unison.

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode824
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:824: @code{Voice} contexts, so
if using @code{\relative} octaves, then
so if the music is being specified in relative mode ...

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode834
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:834: A @code{\relative}
section that is placed outside of @code{\partcombine}
section that encloses @code{\partcombine} has no ...

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode854
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:854: into a  chord, or showing
one voice as solo is, therefore, not ideal as
space

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode864
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:864: @code{\partcombineApart}
or @code{\partcombineApartOnce}: This keeps the
I think the items in this section read better if "and" is used together
with plural verbs, like this:

@code{\partcombineApart} and @code{\partcombineApartOnce} keep the notes
...

Similarly for the other items (not marked).

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode956
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:956: started when  combining
notes that have just started in the other
space

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode957
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:957: @code{Voice}. This can
lead to a number of unexpected issues including
space

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/diff/1/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode966
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:966: give the voices,
internally, its own custom names; @code{one} and
colon

http://codereview.appspot.com/4629073/



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