[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Janne V. Kujala]

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Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Janne V. Kujala <address@hidden>        03/05/03 17:03:10

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        Paper          : paper.tex 

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--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.145   Sat May  3 16:10:48 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Sat May  3 17:03:10 2003
@@ -55,19 +55,8 @@
 
 \begin{abstract}
 
-%FIXME: more references of texture generation 
-
 %FIXME: Justify why adding unique background will help recognise a document 
 %from a fragment and enhance text readability. (Optional)
-
-%FIXME: Add a concise description of how fig. 3 works in the paper.
-
-%FIXME: Make the titles of figures shorter, and explain the details in the 
-%context.(Optional)
-
-%FIXME: Revise the spelling and grammar errors, esp. grammar of long sentences.
-
-
 %FIXME: more concise and exact explanations in some sections
 %FIXME: what are this paper's specific contributions? (e.g., in Sec. 4)
 
@@ -360,7 +349,7 @@
 %of visual perception 
 %are fairly well known
 in the visual cortex, there are cells sensitive to different 
-frequencies, orientations, and locations in the visual field%(see, e.g.,~Bruce 
et al
+frequencies, orientations, and locations in the visual field%(see, e.g., Bruce 
et al
 \cite{bruce96visualperception}.
 
 On a higher level, the correlations between local features are combined 
@@ -502,7 +491,7 @@
 %  
 %  For instance, consider a published scientific article
 %  available through several different URLs on the WWW,
-%  e.g.,~through ResearchIndex\cite{giles98citeseer%,lawrence99digital
+%  e.g., through ResearchIndex\cite{giles98citeseer%,lawrence99digital
 %  }, 
 %  the ACM portal and the author's web site. 
 %  Now, when a user downloads and saves one copy, the relationship between
@@ -626,8 +615,8 @@
 a limited
 number of different features detected can be grouped into 
 objects, indicating that the spatial resolution of the feature
-vector is quite low -- as a well-known example, conjunction
-coding is not preattentive -- red squares are hard to find among
+vector is quite low --- as a well-known example, conjunction
+coding is not preattentive --- red squares are hard to find among
 green squares and red and green circles.
 
 The feature vector is then used to compute 
@@ -651,8 +640,8 @@
 The qualitative model of visual perception used to create
 the algorithm. 
 The visual input is transformed into a feature vector,
-which contains numbers (activation levels) corresponding to 
-e.g.~colors, edges, curves and small patterns.
+which contains numbers (activation levels) corresponding to, 
+e.g., colors, edges, curves and small patterns.
 The feature vector is matched against the memorized textures.
 In order to generate recognizable textures, random seed
 values should produce 
@@ -740,7 +729,7 @@
 in order to produce a unique background from 
 a random vector.
 Features that are orthogonal for human perception 
-(e.g.,~color and the direction of the fastest luminance change)
+(e.g., color and the direction of the fastest luminance change)
 should be independently random, and features not orthogonal 
 (e.g., colors of neighbouring pixels) 
 should be correlated so as to maximize the entropy.
@@ -1572,8 +1561,8 @@
 magazines and web sites have long used skillfully designed 
 graphical elements to make themselves recognizable.
 However, our algorithm is able to generate an unlimited
-amount of unique backgrounds cheaply, making it possible
-e.g. for all academic articles with similar typography
+amount of unique backgrounds cheaply, making it possible,
+e.g., for all academic articles with similar typography
 to have their own background.
 
 %\subsection{Further work}
@@ -1610,9 +1599,10 @@
 % to use repeating units for non-repeating backgrounds --- but use more than 
one,
 % which are not rationally related.
 
-We report an initial recognition experiment showing that the textures
+We have conducted an initial recognition experiment 
+showing that the textures
 generated by our algorithm are indeed recognizable.
-Carrying out usability more tests is necessary, both
+Carrying out more usability tests is necessary, both
 to measure how well textures can be remembered
 and to make the ad hoc distributions more experimentally based.