[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm short-paper.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/30 13:56:11

Modified files:
        storm          : short-paper.rst 

Log message:
        Shorten abstract

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.32&tr2=1.33&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.32 
manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.33
--- manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.32      Fri May 30 13:53:05 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst   Fri May 30 13:56:11 2003
@@ -4,22 +4,21 @@
 
 .. TODO
 
+..  Linking personal documents like we link Web pages is inconvenient
+    enough that users rarely if ever do it. A major reason is that
+    links break when documents are moved around or sent by mail.
+
 
 .. raw:: latex
 
     \begin{abstract}
-    Linking personal documents like we link Web pages is inconvenient
-    enough that users rarely if ever do it. A major reason is that
-    links break when documents are moved around or sent by mail.
-       
-    We present Storm, a storage system for use both on the
+    We present Storm, a storage system which unifies the
     desktop and the public network. Storm assigns each document
     a permanent unique URI when it is created. Using peer-to-peer
     technology, we can locate documents even though our URIs
     do not include location information.
-    Thus, links continue to work unchanged when documents are emailed
+    Links continue to work unchanged when documents are emailed
     or published on the network.
-
     We have extended KDE to understand
     Storm URIs. Other systems such as GNU Emacs are able to use Storm 
     through an HTTP gateway.