[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm short-paper.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/05/30 18:38:15

Modified files:
        storm          : short-paper.rst 

Log message:
        very close, now only final readthrough

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.43&tr2=1.44&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.43 
manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.44
--- manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.43      Fri May 30 18:31:39 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst   Fri May 30 18:38:15 2003
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
 "The current version of document *X* is block *Y*.
 Pointer blocks *a,b*, specifying previous versions
 of this document, are now obsolete." Additionally,
-it contains a digital signature of the above information.
+it contains a digital signature of the above.
 
 The pointer *X*
 contains the public key used for signatures --- this allows
@@ -198,13 +198,13 @@
 versioning model. More than one version of a document
 can be "current" (e.g., when different people in a working
 group edit the document concurrently).
+There is also a scheme for storing only
+the differences between consecutive versions,
+but there is no space to explain it here.
 
 .. A suitable user interface around pointers allows the user to
    still see old-style file names, but with the file names attached
    to his/her person, not to a particular computer.
-   There is also a scheme to compress blocks storing only
-   the differences between consecutive versions of a document,
-   but there is no space to explain it here.
 
 
 ..          storing
@@ -327,9 +327,8 @@
    pointer blocks which allow basic versioning of documents.
 
 Storm is by no means finished: more work is needed
-on, e.g., versioning when a group of people are
-collaborating on a document, i.e., when a pointer is not
-associated with only one person.
+on, e.g., versioning when a pointer is
+associated with more than one person.
 
 ..  A distributed hashtable is used to locate published documents
     on a global scale.