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Re: draft release announcement

From: Juergen Reuter
Subject: Re: draft release announcement
Date: Tue, 31 Oct 2006 11:11:13 +0100 (CET)

"elegant input format" and "hard for other programs to parse" sounds somewhat like a contradiction. Maybe "sophisticated" instead of "elegant" would be more appropriate?

I am not sure about capitalization in English language, but shouldn't

* all words in the headline except "than" start with a capital letter and

* the itemized texts start with small letters (except "DocBook"), since
  they continue an incomplete sentence?

Shouldn't there be a full-stop dot after the last item?


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