Re: proofreading tutorial

[Graham Percival]

Mats Bengtsson wrote:
> - The cut-&-pastable-section of the first example contains lots
>  of lines that are just confusing and should never be included
>  in a stand-alone .ly file. Maybe it's better to not use the fragment
>  option of lilypond-book and recommend the reader to only
>  cut the lines after "ly snippet follows" (or whatever it says
>  when you don't use the fragment option).

Ah, oops.  I made a special policy of
@ignore
Tutorial guidelines:
- unless you have a really good reason, use either
    @l ilypond[quote,ragged-right,verbatim]
  or
    @l ilypond[quote,ragged-right,verbatim,fragment,relative=2]
  (without spaces)
  Don't use any other relative=X commands (make it a non-fragment
  example), and don't use fragment without relative=2.


but I forgot to fix the very first example.  I've fixed that now.

> - There's a new paragraph before "to the end of the file".

> - In "2.1.1 Compiling a file", there's a typo in "should be also be".

Thanks, fixed.

> - The instructions for Windows need some polishing. Basically,
>  you could more or less the same as on Mac, namely double-click
>  the LilyPond icon on the desktop to start a simple text editor.
>  I can come back with more details when I have a Windows box
>  in front of me.

Thanks, I don't have access.

> - In "2.1.1 Compiling a file", footnote 3: "have any tools" -> "have any 
> such tools".

Fixed.

Cheers,
- Graham