Re: proofreading tutorial

[Alard de Boer]

On 23/01/07, Graham Percival <address@hidden> wrote:
> The rewritten tutorial is online,
> http://lilypond.org/doc/v2.11/Documentation/user/lilypond/Tutorial
>
> Could a few people proofread it?  In the near future the translation
> teams will be working on it, so it would be good if we finalized node
> names and caught any major mistakes.

The tutorial is great! Some minor comments:

2.1.1 second footnote: These easiest -> The easiest

2.1.1 Section MacOS X, 2nd par: lilypond -> LilyPond (all other uses
except the Unix command line have the two capital letters)

2.3.1 3rd paragraph: means that are -> means that they are

2.3.1 4th par: same time simple -> same time simply

2.3.1 5th par: maybe add "Also note that each note is relative to the
previous one in the input, and not relative to the c'' in the \relative
function."

2.3.1 6th par: exression -> expression

2.3.5 2nd par: angled -> angle

2.4.1 the lyrics are longer than the music, so there are no notes for
"free" in the 2nd example or "free __" in the 3rd

2.4.2 the last example contains a comment for yourself (-gp); also you
use \relative without a pitch here for the first time, which should be
explained (or changed to use a pitch)

2.5.4 2nd par: Identifiers -> With identifiers

2.5.4 4th par: should have -> must have (or are non-alphabetic
characters allowed?)


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Alard.

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