Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box (issue 48430043)

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Description:
Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box

The content of this box was somewhat confusing and inconsistent. See
http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-devel/2014-01/msg00011.html

This commit tries to incorporate the suggestions made in this thread
as far as I considered appropriate.

Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/

Affected files (+9, -5 lines):
  M Documentation/web/introduction.itexi


Index: Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
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@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 @unnumbered Introduction

 @divClass{column-center-top}
address@hidden Our Goal
address@hidden Our Mission

 @imageFloat{flat-design,png,right}

@@ -20,10 +20,14 @@ soulless look of computer-printed sheet music.   
Musicians prefer
 reading beautiful music, so why couldn't programmers write
 software to produce elegant printed parts?

-The result is a system which frees musicians from the details of
-layout, allowing them to focus on making music.  LilyPond works
-with them to create publication-quality parts, crafted in the best
-traditions of classical music engraving.
+The result is a program that creates beautiful sheet music
+following the best traditions of classical music engraving.
+It takes care of the details of layout programmatically,
+allowing composers, transcribers and publishers to focus
+on the @emph{music} instead of improving their software's
+default output.  Performers will get parts that let them
+concentrate on @emph{playing} music instead of @emph{reading} it.
+

 @divEnd