Re: Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box (issue 48430043)

[Phil Holmes]

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> https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
> File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right):
>
> https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode14
> Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:14: @subheading Our Mission
> On 2014/01/07 10:17:47, PhilEHolmes wrote:
> > I dislike this intensely.  It smacks of corporate nonsense - read the
> text that
> > large conglomerates have under "Our mission".  Please leave it as
> goal, or
> > something similar and non-corporate.
>
> Too bad you didn't notice that in one of my earlier
> suggestions...

I did, but was not sure what you were proposing to change, as opposed to 
just making suggestions.

> I don't like the "Goal" because it sounds too much like
> something unachieved.
>
> Any other suggestions?

"Our goal" :-)  No less achieved than a mission.

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