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From: | Ralf Hemmecke |
Subject: | Re: [Axiom-developer] Front page esthetic |
Date: | Wed, 02 Aug 2006 12:01:31 +0200 |
User-agent: | Thunderbird 1.5.0.5 (X11/20060719) |
| What about I give it a try :| | About| News | Documentation | FAQ | Screenshots/Video | ----------- | Online try | Download | --------- | Developer | Mail list | Bug report | Bibliography | Related link I like it.
Looks not too bad to me, but Bill made sections with headlines. So you are trying to remove the headlines. OK I can live with that.
I like the first section above, but Screenshots/video is a bit too long as a name. Also "Online try"? Why in the next section? What has that to do with Download?
Screenshot/video/online try all belong into one category I think. That is for getting a feeling of what axiom can do. From the About page there should certainly be a link to these pages. So I would rather suggest
... FAQ ------------ Screenshots Video Online Try ----------- Download -----------I don't know what you mean with Developer. Should that link to http://wiki.axiom-developer.org/SandBoxActiveAxiomDevelopers/withNavigator
I don't think that Bibliography is the best word. Would you immediately think that you can find actual downloadable papers behind it? Is there some native speaker who can come up with something better?
Ralf
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